雅思写作怎么提分？

   雅思写作要求考生们的答案具有丰富度和多样性，今天为大家介绍几个在不影响连贯度的同时，可以提升文章的丰富度，减少重复用词的小方法。“people”是雅思大作文写作的常用词，无论是表达观点还是拓展解释，都会多次用到，以下就是3个解决重复使用people问题的小妙招。
 
1.指代
如果前文已经出现people，后文用代词they/them指代即可。例如：
原句：it is much easier for people to interact with each other if people work in an open-plan office. 
优化：it is much easier for people to interact with each other if they work in an open-plan office. 
 
2.用具体的名词做替换
 
peopole泛指任何人，但在写作中，结合不同的话题，实际上我们所说的people是在特指某一类人。例如：
 
it is much easier for people to interact with each other if they work in an open-plan office. 
 
这里的people，是指people who work in an office，在这一场景下，我们可以想到一些意思更为具体的名词，如：workers, colleagues, employees. 用这类词来替换people，还可以提升LR表现。
 
it is much easier for workers/colleagues/employees to interact with each other if they work in an open-plan office. 
 
 
需要注意的是，有时people不能被替换。替换表达要以准确为原则。
3.看看是否可以删除people
 
在有些句子里，people是可以去掉的。例如：
 
the government should run campaigns to raise people’s awareness about obesity
taking out a credit card can result in financial trouble for many people
 
 
awarenss肯定是人的awareness，trouble也肯定是给人带来的trouble，所以删掉people，句子表达更简洁，CC表现更好。
 
同时，也要注意，有些动词是必须接宾语的，这时people就不能省略，例如：
 
allow – Having a holiday allows people to relax.
cause – Not being able to find a job can cause some people to feel depressed.
enable – A degree can enable people to get a well-paid job.
encourage – Companies can encourage people to exercise in their lunch hour.
force – Having rules will force people to start taking recycling more seriously.
persuade – It can be hard to persuade people to change their behaviour.
warn – Governments should warn people of the danger of eating fast food.
 
4.改写句式
 
很多时候，我们需要用改变句子结构的方式，来确保与people有关的语法准确。改写方式包括：主动改为被动，用动名词开头，用名词短语开头，等。
 
例如：

原句: I would argue that if people arrange everything in order, then homes are more relaxing places.
优化：I would argue that homes are more relaxing places if everything is arranged in order.
 
原句: However, people throw away too many products instead of recycling them.
优化：However, too many products are thrown away instead of being recycled.
 
原句: Moreover, people’s wish to keep up with new fashion trends can lead them to spending money that they do not have.
 
优化：Moreover, wishing to keep up with new fashion trends can lead people to spending money that they do not have.
 
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